Big Bang/Exchange Fic Discussion #1

[spnanonhaven]

Post your threads for Big Bangs and exchange fics here.

Format like so:


SUBJECT: Title [Pairing, Rating] by AUTHOR
CONTENT: Art by whoever

http://url of the master post on the BB comm.

Comments

Re: spn_cinema The Indiscreet Window [RPS J2 NC17] by zuben_eschamali

[(Anonymous)]

Please do.

Re: spn_cinema The Indiscreet Window [RPS J2 NC17] by zuben_eschamali

[(Anonymous)]

I guess I kind of agree with the other posters. I was quite excited for this, I'm a big fan of the movie and I like zubeneschamali's writing (adore her Bourne Identity J2!). I liked this, but I didn't love it. The setting really worked, but Jared's character felt under-developed to me. There were also a few dropped threads (SPOILERS!) for instance Jared is upset when Jensen gets binoculars because he thinks Jensen is stalking someone He's angry because someone he cared about had a stalker, and I thought that was going somewhere, but it wasn't.

These are kind of minor quibbles, though - I did enjoy it, it just felt like maybe it needed one more pass to be really awesome.