Big Bang/Exchange Fic Discussion #1

[spnanonhaven]

Post your threads for Big Bangs and exchange fics here.

Format like so:


SUBJECT: Title [Pairing, Rating] by AUTHOR
CONTENT: Art by whoever

http://url of the master post on the BB comm.

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spn_cinema The Pleasures Of Ordinary Men [RPS J2 NC17] by sonnygrl11

[(Anonymous)]

Plan B

http://spn-cinema.livejournal.com/20388.html

word count 65400

Re: spn_cinema The Pleasures Of Ordinary Men [RPS J2 NC17] by sonnygrl11

[(Anonymous)]

Is this vamphile's alter-ego?

Re: spn_cinema The Pleasures Of Ordinary Men [RPS J2 NC17] by sonnygrl11

[(Anonymous)]

The AN's say this is the author's first long J2 so probably not. I gave it a try, and it's pretty awful. I may not be a big fan of vamphile's fic, but she writes a hell of a lot better than this.

I bailed about a third of the way through, between the incredibly stilted dialogue, and the really bad characterisation, I just couldn't read any more.

Also the writer's need to bold and CAPITALISE words for emphasis got annoying after a while. It's a trick that needs to be used sparingly, not over and over again.

Re: spn_cinema The Pleasures Of Ordinary Men [RPS J2 NC17] by sonnygrl11

[(Anonymous)]

Why is there sometimes bold and sometimes italics and sometimes both?

Re: spn_cinema The Pleasures Of Ordinary Men [RPS J2 NC17] by sonnygrl11

[(Anonymous)]

**WARNING**: raw/ bareback sex ; breeding/seeding ; humping (a pillow) ; frottage

We're warning for pillow-humping now? And breeding/seeding is a new one on me, though it did send my brain to bad bad places.

Re: spn_cinema The Pleasures Of Ordinary Men [RPS J2 NC17] by sonnygrl11

[(Anonymous)]

breeding/seeding is a new one on me

I want to pinch your cheeks. But in a good way. :D

Re: spn_cinema The Pleasures Of Ordinary Men [RPS J2 NC17] by sonnygrl11

[(Anonymous)]

Breeding/seeding is a common thing I see on actual porn, but I thought it was just a... more spicy way to say barebacking, so idk.

I enjoy that "a pillow" is in parenthesis for some reason.