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spnanonhaven ([personal profile] spnanonhaven) wrote2010-10-18 09:53 pm

Big Bang/Exchange Fic Discussion #1

Post your threads for Big Bangs and exchange fics here.

Format like so:


SUBJECT: Title [Pairing, Rating] by AUTHOR
CONTENT: Art by whoever

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Re: D/C SA Week 1: 9/20 - 9/26

(Anonymous) 2010-10-19 01:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Author of Party, if you're reading this: trust your audience a little more. I'm not a stickler about tell vs. show, and there are places where you used telling effectively to move the story along without detailing things that are relevant but peripheral, but I can also recall at least two instances where you've shown and then also told. Your readers are smart and (possibly more importantly) your writing is clear: you don't need to explain what just happened.

Everything else about this story I absolutely love. <3