Big Bang/Exchange Fic Discussion #1

[spnanonhaven]

Post your threads for Big Bangs and exchange fics here.

Format like so:


SUBJECT: Title [Pairing, Rating] by AUTHOR
CONTENT: Art by whoever

http://url of the master post on the BB comm.

Comments

Re: DCBB: Earthbound (Without these wings I learned to fly...) [D&C gen/pre-slash PG] by fate_incomp

[(Anonymous)]

COMMAS!! HOLY SHAMOLEY, PEOPLE, WHERE ARE THE COMMAS? PAUSE FOR BREATH ONCE IN A WHILE, TYPE IN SOMETHING OTHER THAN A FLAT DRONING MONOTONE, WHICH IS HOW IT READS TO ME IF THERE ARE NO PAUSES IN THE SENTENCES!!

HERE, I GIVE TO YOU, O AUTHORS OF THE BIG BANGS, THE GIFT OF COMMAS, A KETTLE BRIM-FULL OF THEM, SCOOTING AROUND WITH THEIR LITTLE TAILS FLICKERING, MOROSE AND NEGLECTED AND JUST LONGING TO POPULATE YOUR STORIES!!

:::flings punctuation all over DCBB comm:::

BE FREE, MY LOVELIES, BE FREE! GO FORTH TO SPRINKLE YOURSELVES LIBERALLY INTO THE FIC, LIKE PRECIOUS STARDUST.

AND TAKE SOME SEMICOLONS WITH YOU FOR DIVERSITY.

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When my bosom stops heaving, I could leave these examples:

"Cas you good?" Dean asked.
"Dean I'm fine I just..."

and

"I'm leaving Bobby," he [Dean] said quietly.

Despite appearances, Dean isn't breaking up with Bobby.

pant, pant, pant, pant

Re: DCBB: Earthbound (Without these wings I learned to fly...) [D&C gen/pre-slash PG] by fate_incomp

[(Anonymous)]

sa

And then we've got:

"Dean"
"Cas"
"Dean"
"Cas"
"Bobby"
"Dean"
"Bobby"
"Cas"

like some kind of demented Mouseketeer roll call. They all address each other by name practically every other line of dialogue.

I could have liked this fic-- chapter 5 has some bleeding, feverish, out-of-it-with-pain Cas which my h/c-loving self just eats right up with unseemly glee. And a one-off character I always liked shows up briefly.

BUT GREAT BALLS OF FIRE, FOLKS, THE COMMAS!

Re: DCBB: Earthbound (Without these wings I learned to fly...) [D&C gen/pre-slash PG] by fate_incomp

[(Anonymous)]

We can't waste the commas nonnie we need them for Christmas lists!

(*heart*)

Re: DCBB: Earthbound (Without these wings I learned to fly...) [D&C gen/pre-slash PG] by fate_incomp

[(Anonymous)]

I had some left over from the summer growing season, and felt like Random Act-ing them!

Re: DCBB: Earthbound (Without these wings I learned to fly...) [D&C gen/pre-slash PG] by fate_incomp

[(Anonymous)]

ILU. And I love commas.