Just read this...kind of wish I hadn't. A lot of it was really good, the frottage scene in the club I agree was definitely very hot. but I can't get over the fact that Jared ended up admitting that he actually HAD stolen Jensen's ideas in the beginning. Which, hello, academic plagiarism! kind of unforgiveable! And somehow, this confession led to Jensen needing to apologize to Jared! That pissed me off so much I wanted Jensen to punch Jared again and go off and find someone else who wasn't so goddamn superiorly perfect and a plagiarist to boot.

Author, a bit awkward you're likely reading this, so... you have a lot of potential and the first half I was really enjoying (and I disagree with the above nonnie, I thought there was good character in the location), but the ending really annoyed me, so, have a think about it?