Someone wrote in [personal profile] spnanonhaven 2010-10-20 03:20 am (UTC)

Re: DCBB: Bird of Paradise [Dean/Castiel, R] by trinityofone

I enjoyed this but didn't love it as much as her previous fics. It was well done, but I think because I love the books so much this fusion was wrong for me. The tweaks to both canons were interesting but unsatisfying. I liked the theocracy set up, but would have liked a little more depth and explanation to the world building.

The central relationship was fine, but I didn't really see it as romantic for most of the fic. The aging body issue was just odd and tacked on imho. I don't know. Maybe I just had too high expectations for this one.

Also, the art is fine. I liked the cover and the mockingbird dividers. I didn't love the illustrator art - too static.

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