I don't think using song lyrics in a fic is necessarily risky. Plenty of people use song lyrics in fic. Just because it's a trademark of badfic doesn't meant that using song lyrics in a fic automatically makes it bad. However, in this case, the lyrics didn't work for me. They pulled me out of the story, I found it frustrating that there would be three or four lines of lyrics followed by only a single line of prose, etc.
Re: spn_cinema To Love And Be Loved In Return [SPN Sam/Dean NC17] by locknkey
I don't think using song lyrics in a fic is necessarily risky. Plenty of people use song lyrics in fic. Just because it's a trademark of badfic doesn't meant that using song lyrics in a fic automatically makes it bad. However, in this case, the lyrics didn't work for me. They pulled me out of the story, I found it frustrating that there would be three or four lines of lyrics followed by only a single line of prose, etc.